Sabtu, Januari 26, 2008

Hairstyle oh Hairstyle,,,

analytical exposition


Being teenagers like us actually near with trend, especially hairstyle. Which like Mohawk, emo-style, spike, army-look style, bald, etc. We are free to choose one. Unfortunately, in our ‘lovely’ school there is a rule that boy students’ hairstyle must be ‘neat’; it can’t be longhaired or ‘disorder’ hair. But, I think that rule exactly not too important and the limitation isn’t clear enough. Why I can say that?

Firstly, school doesn’t clarify the rule. How long is hair that permitted or not by school. Don’t make us (the boy students) confuse!

Secondly, I think the hairstyle not influence student’ skill competence when we study. As long as not disturb the other people… I think it’s OK.

Last, school doesn’t know the hairstyle that being happening for teenager now. The theme of the newest style is ‘disorder’ but neat, not neat but ‘disorder’!

So, the conclusion is … the rule about boy’ hairstyle must be completely removed because not effective for us, especially the boy students of 24 Senior High School. I’m sure that although our hairstyle called ‘bad haircut’ by school, we still able to do our best… to create our future of course.

What do you think about the rule? Is it effective?

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